How to Craft Your Essay for the ARAMark Food Service Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a well-rounded essay, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal history. What experiences have shaped your desire to pursue a degree? Consider family influences, community involvement, or pivotal moments in your life.
• Achievements: Identify specific accomplishments that demonstrate your skills and dedication. Use metrics where possible—such as leadership roles, community service hours, or academic honors—to quantify your impact.
• The Gap: Acknowledge what you currently lack and how this scholarship will help bridge that gap. Be honest about your financial needs and articulate how further study at Tarleton State University aligns with your aspirations.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that reveal your character. What values drive you? What unique perspectives do you bring? Specific anecdotes can help illustrate your points and make your essay memorable.

Outlining Your Essay

Start by creating an outline that organizes your thoughts logically. Each section of your essay should focus on a single idea, progressing in a way that builds your narrative. Consider the following structure:

1. Introduction: Open with a compelling moment or scene that captures your reader's attention.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate one paragraph to each of the four buckets. Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea and transitions smoothly to the next.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on what you have learned from your experiences and how the scholarship will help you achieve your future goals.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft your essay, maintain an active voice and be specific. Avoid vague statements and instead focus on concrete details that illustrate your points. Each paragraph should reflect your unique voice and perspective, allowing the committee to connect with you as an individual.

Revision & “So What?”

After completing your draft, take time to revise. Ask yourself, “So what?” for each major point you make. Ensure that your reflections demonstrate growth and insight. Seek feedback from peers or mentors to gain different perspectives and refine your message.

Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common pitfalls that can detract from your essay’s effectiveness:

• Avoid clichés and generic statements that lack specificity.
• Do not fabricate experiences or embellish achievements; honesty is crucial.
• Steer clear of passive voice where an active subject exists.
• Ensure your essay stays focused on your unique journey and how it aligns with the scholarship’s objectives.