How to Craft Your Essay for the Barney and Angela Richards Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts by reflecting on the four material buckets: Background, Achievements, The Gap, and Personality.

• Background: What experiences have shaped your interest in law? Consider family influences, educational experiences, or significant events that sparked your passion.
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments that demonstrate your capabilities. Use metrics where possible—such as leadership roles, academic honors, or projects that had a tangible impact.
• The Gap: Reflect on what you lack in your current knowledge or experience and how this scholarship will help you bridge that gap. Be specific about your goals and how further study will facilitate your growth.
• Personality: Share details that humanize you. What values drive you? What unique perspectives do you bring to the table? Include anecdotes that illustrate your character.

Structuring Your Essay

Once you have gathered your material, outline your essay to create a logical flow. Aim for a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, with transitions that guide the reader through your narrative.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, use an active voice to convey your experiences and insights. Start with a concrete moment or scene that captures attention, avoiding clichés. Reflect on what you learned from each experience and why it matters, answering the “So what?” question throughout your essay.

Revision and Reflection

After drafting, take a break before revising. Read your essay with fresh eyes, focusing on clarity and coherence. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall narrative and that your reflections are specific and impactful. Seek feedback from peers or mentors, and be open to constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common mistakes that can weaken your essay:

• Avoid vague statements and superlatives without evidence. Instead of saying you are “passionate,” demonstrate it through your actions and achievements.
• Steer clear of passive voice. Use active constructions to make your writing more engaging.
• Do not include invented facts or experiences. Authenticity is crucial in conveying your genuine self.