How to Craft Your Essay for the Blanche O. Williams Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts into four material buckets: Background, Achievements, The Gap, and Personality.

• Background: Reflect on experiences that have shaped your academic and personal journey. Consider family influences, educational experiences, and significant events.
• Achievements: List measurable accomplishments, such as academic honors, leadership roles, or community service. Use specific metrics where possible, such as “led a team of 10 volunteers” or “increased club membership by 30%.”
• The Gap: Identify areas where you seek growth through your education at Stetson University. Discuss skills or knowledge you aim to acquire and how they relate to your future goals.
• Personality: Include personal anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and unique qualities. This can help the committee see you as a well-rounded individual.

Creating an Outline

Draft an outline based on the material you’ve gathered. Aim for a logical flow that connects your background to your achievements, highlights the gap, and concludes with your personality. Each section should transition smoothly to the next, creating a cohesive narrative.

Drafting Voice and Style

When writing your essay, use an active voice and specific language. Avoid vague statements and clichés. Start with an engaging moment or story that captures the reader’s attention. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea and supports your overall message.

Reflection and “So What?”

As you revise, ask yourself what you learned from each experience and why it matters. This reflection will help you articulate your insights and demonstrate personal growth. Make sure to connect your past experiences to your future aspirations at Stetson.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or overly broad statements.
• Steer clear of vague language that lacks specific examples.
• Do not use passive voice when an active subject can enhance clarity.
• Ensure all details are accurate and verifiable; do not invent facts or experiences.