How to Craft Your Essay for the BCT Alumni Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a well-rounded essay, gather material across these four categories:

• Background: Reflect on your upbringing, education, and experiences that have shaped your interest in building and construction technology. Consider how these experiences inform your goals.
• Achievements: List specific accomplishments related to leadership or construction, including projects, roles, or recognitions. Quantify your impact where possible, such as the number of people you led or projects completed.
• The Gap: Identify areas where you seek growth or knowledge. Articulate why this scholarship and further study at UMass Amherst are essential for your development in the field.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal anecdotes and insights. Share what drives you, your values, and how they align with the scholarship’s goals.

Outlining Your Essay

Organize your thoughts into a clear outline. Each section should focus on one of the four buckets, ensuring a logical flow. Start with a compelling hook that draws the reader in, followed by your background, achievements, gap, and personality insights. Conclude with a strong statement about your future aspirations and how the scholarship will help you achieve them.

Drafting Voice and Style

Use an active voice to convey your experiences and aspirations. Avoid clichés and ensure every statement is backed by specific examples. Begin with an engaging scene or moment that illustrates your connection to the field. Throughout the essay, reflect on your growth and insights—answer the “So what?” for each major point you make.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Read your essay critically, checking for clarity and flow. Ensure each paragraph has a clear purpose and contributes to your overall narrative. Ask yourself if your reflections provide insight into your character and ambitions. Seek feedback from peers or mentors to gain perspective on your essay’s effectiveness.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid vague statements about passion or interest without evidence.
• Steer clear of bureaucratic language; keep your writing personal and engaging.
• Do not include fabricated details about your experiences or achievements.
• Refrain from using clichés or generic openings; start with a unique moment from your life.