How to Craft Your Essay for the Dr. M. G. Hunter Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Gather material for your essay by reflecting on four key areas:

• Background: What experiences have shaped who you are today? Consider family, education, and community influences.
• Achievements: What specific accomplishments demonstrate your capabilities? Quantify your results where possible, such as leadership roles or projects completed.
• The Gap: Identify what you lack that further study at Stetson can provide. Reflect on how this scholarship will help bridge that gap.
• Personality: Share humanizing details that showcase your values, interests, and unique qualities. Make sure these elements support your overall narrative.

Creating a Structured Outline

Organize your thoughts into a coherent outline. Each section of your essay should focus on one main idea. Consider the following structure:

1. Introduction: Start with a strong hook that draws the reader in. This could be a vivid moment or a meaningful insight.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Use specific examples to illustrate your points and connect them to the scholarship’s goals.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and the impact of receiving the scholarship. Reinforce your commitment to making a difference.

Drafting Voice and Style

Write in an active voice, focusing on your actions and experiences. Avoid clichés and vague statements. Instead, be specific about your achievements and insights. Each paragraph should clearly contribute to your overall narrative and answer the question, “So what?” about your experiences.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Read your essay with fresh eyes, looking for clarity and coherence. Ensure each section answers the “So what?” question, reflecting on what you learned and how it shapes your future goals.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of the following mistakes:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés.
• Do not exaggerate or fabricate experiences; authenticity is key.
• Steer clear of passive voice and bureaucratic language.
• Ensure that every paragraph serves a purpose and contributes to your overall message.