How to Write an Essay for the Judge Roy L. Roulhac Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material across the following four buckets:

• Background: Reflect on your upbringing, educational journey, and any significant experiences that have shaped who you are today. Consider how these experiences have influenced your decision to pursue higher education.
• Achievements: List your academic and extracurricular achievements. Quantify your accomplishments with specific metrics, such as GPA, awards, or leadership roles, and describe your responsibilities and the outcomes of your efforts.
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your educational journey and how this scholarship will help bridge that gap. Be specific about your goals and how attending Chipola College will help you achieve them.
• Personality: Include personal anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and character. This helps the committee see you as a whole person, not just a list of achievements.

Creating an Outline

Once you have gathered your material, organize it into a coherent outline. Start with an engaging introduction that sets the scene or presents a concrete moment relevant to your journey. Follow with body paragraphs that delve into each of the four buckets, ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus and contributes to your overall narrative. Conclude with a strong closing that reflects on your journey and reinforces your commitment to making an impact through your education.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft your essay, use an active voice and specific language. Avoid clichés and vague expressions. Instead of saying you are passionate about a subject, explain what drives that passion with concrete examples. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea, with clear transitions that guide the reader through your narrative.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. When you return to your essay, read it with fresh eyes and ask yourself, “So what?” for each section. Ensure that every paragraph answers the question of why your experiences and aspirations matter. Look for areas where you can add specificity or clarity, and remove any redundant or filler content.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be aware of common pitfalls that can weaken your essay:

• Avoid starting with generic statements or clichés that do not add value.
• Ensure all claims are backed by evidence or specific examples.
• Do not use passive voice when an active subject exists.
• Steer clear of bureaucratic language; keep your writing personal and engaging.
• Finally, do not invent facts or embellish your experiences; authenticity is crucial.