How to Write an Essay for the KBIA Instructor Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts into four key areas: background, achievements, gap, and personality.

• Background: Identify formative experiences that have shaped your interest in cancer awareness or education. Think about personal stories or challenges that have influenced your path.
• Achievements: List your relevant accomplishments, focusing on metrics and outcomes. Highlight specific projects, roles, or initiatives that demonstrate your leadership and impact.
• The Gap: Reflect on what you currently lack in your education or experience that this scholarship could help address. Be specific about how further study at The Reid R. Sacco AYA Cancer Alliance will fill this gap.
• Personality: Consider how to humanize your essay with personal values, interests, and unique details that make you memorable. Share anecdotes that reveal your character and commitment.

Structuring Your Outline

Once you have gathered your material, create an outline that flows logically. Start with a compelling opening that draws the reader in. Each section should have a clear purpose and lead to the next. Aim for a coherent narrative that showcases your journey, insights, and future aspirations.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, use an active voice and specific language. Avoid clichés and generalizations. Instead of stating your passion, illustrate it through concrete examples and reflections. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and transition smoothly to the next, maintaining the reader's engagement.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a step back and review your essay critically. Ask yourself, “So what?” for each major point. Ensure that your reflections demonstrate personal growth and clarify why your experiences matter to the committee. Revise for clarity, coherence, and impact, making sure every sentence contributes to your overall narrative.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common mistakes that can detract from your essay's effectiveness:

• Using vague language or empty superlatives without evidence.
• Starting with clichéd phrases or generic introductions.
• Neglecting to address the scholarship’s specific focus and values.
• Failing to connect your experiences to your future goals.