Crafting Your Essay for the Keisha Bodden Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a well-rounded essay, explore the following four material buckets:

• Background: Reflect on your upbringing, experiences, and influences that have shaped who you are today. What challenges have you faced, and how have they informed your educational aspirations?
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments in your academic and extracurricular life. Use specific metrics or examples to demonstrate your impact, such as leadership roles, community service, or academic honors.
• The Gap: Consider what you currently lack in your educational journey. How will this scholarship help bridge that gap? Be specific about your goals and how further study at the Vanese Agape Family Service & Learning Center is essential for your development.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal anecdotes that reveal your values, interests, and motivations. This is your chance to show who you are beyond your achievements.

Outline Your Essay

Organize your thoughts into a coherent structure. A suggested outline could include:

1. Introduction: Start with a concrete moment or scene that captures your journey. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Ensure each section flows logically to the next, reinforcing your narrative.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and the significance of the scholarship. How will it empower you to contribute to your community and beyond?

Drafting Voice and Style

Write in an active voice, focusing on your experiences and actions. Use specific details and numbers to enhance your narrative. Avoid clichés and ensure that every claim is backed by evidence or personal experience. As you draft, keep asking yourself, “So what?” to ensure each section has a clear purpose and meaning.

Revision and “So What?”

After completing your draft, take a break before revising. Look for areas where you can clarify your message or strengthen your arguments. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to your overall narrative and reflects your personal growth. Consider sharing your essay with a mentor or peer for feedback, focusing on clarity and impact.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Steer clear of these common mistakes:

• Using vague language or empty superlatives without evidence.
• Starting with clichéd phrases or generic statements.
• Neglecting to showcase your unique personality and values.
• Failing to connect your experiences to your future goals.