Crafting Your Essay for the Mike and Flo Novovesky Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Consider your upbringing, influences, and experiences that have shaped your interest in floral design. What moments stand out?
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments in your academic and extracurricular activities. Use metrics where possible. Have you led a project, received awards, or contributed to community initiatives?
• The Gap: Reflect on what you currently lack in your education or skills that this scholarship can help address. Why is further study essential for your growth?
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that showcase your values and character. What unique perspectives do you bring to the field?

Creating an Outline

Structure your essay logically. Start with an engaging opening that draws the reader in. Each paragraph should focus on one idea, with clear transitions to guide the reader through your narrative. A suggested outline might include:

1. Introduction: Hook the reader with a vivid moment or insight.
2. Background: Share your journey and influences.
3. Achievements: Highlight your notable accomplishments.
4. The Gap: Discuss what you need to succeed.
5. Personality: Showcase your unique traits and values.
6. Conclusion: Reflect on your aspirations and the impact of the scholarship.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting, use an active voice and specific details to convey your message. Avoid clichés and generalizations; instead, focus on concrete examples that illustrate your points. Each paragraph should contribute to your overall narrative, emphasizing your commitment to the field.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Look for clarity and coherence in your essay. Ensure that each section answers the “So what?” question—why does your experience matter? Seek feedback from peers or mentors to refine your message further. Consider the flow and impact of your narrative.

Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of common mistakes:

• Avoid vague statements and empty passion. Ensure all claims are backed by specific examples.
• Steer clear of passive voice; always highlight your actions.
• Do not include fabricated facts or experiences.
• Watch out for clichés that dilute your unique voice.