How to Craft Your Essay for the Philip & Ruth Bratten Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal history. What experiences have shaped your educational and career aspirations? Consider family influences, cultural background, or significant life events.
• Achievements: Document your accomplishments. Include specific metrics, roles, and outcomes that demonstrate your capabilities. Think about leadership roles, academic successes, or community service initiatives.
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your educational journey. What skills or knowledge do you hope to gain through further study at Tarleton State University? Be specific about how this scholarship will help bridge that gap.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that reflect your values and character. What unique perspectives do you bring? Use anecdotes that highlight your resilience, empathy, or commitment to helping others.

Structuring Your Essay

Organize your thoughts into a coherent outline. Aim for a clear introduction, body, and conclusion:

1. Introduction: Start with a compelling moment or scene that captures the reader's attention. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body: Dedicate a paragraph to each of the four buckets. Use the STAR method to detail specific situations, actions, and results related to your achievements and background.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and articulate your commitment to making an impact. Address the “So what?” question to emphasize why your experiences matter.

Drafting Voice and Style

Use an active voice throughout your essay. Engage the reader with specific details and avoid vague language. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea, ensuring logical progression. This clarity will help the committee understand your narrative and your fit for the scholarship.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting your essay, take a step back and reflect on its overall message. Does it convey your passion and commitment to your education and community? Ensure that each section answers the “So what?” question, clearly linking your experiences and aspirations to the scholarship’s goals. Seek feedback from peers or mentors to refine your narrative.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of the following mistakes:

• Avoid clichés and filler phrases that dilute your message.
• Do not fabricate experiences or achievements; authenticity is crucial.
• Steer clear of passive voice where an active subject exists.
• Ensure your essay aligns with the scholarship’s intent and demonstrates a clear understanding of its purpose.