How to Craft Your Essay for the Professor John G. Tabor Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

Organize your thoughts into four material buckets: background, achievements, the gap, and personality.

• Background: Reflect on experiences that have shaped your educational journey. Consider family, community, or significant events.
• Achievements: List your accomplishments, focusing on metrics and outcomes. What projects or roles have you undertaken? What impact did they have?
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your educational experience and how this scholarship will help bridge that gap. Be specific about your goals and how further study at Loyola will help you achieve them.
• Personality: Think about unique aspects of your character and values. What makes you stand out? Include anecdotes that humanize your application.

Creating an Outline

Draft a structured outline to organize your essay logically. Start with an engaging opening that draws the reader in. Follow with sections dedicated to each of the four buckets, ensuring each section transitions smoothly to the next. Conclude with a strong closing that reiterates your commitment to making a positive impact.

Drafting Voice and Style

As you draft, maintain an active voice and be specific in your language. Avoid vague statements and clichés. Instead of saying, "I have always been passionate about education," consider a specific moment that illustrates your passion. Reflect on what changed in you through these experiences and why that matters to your future.

Revision and “So What?”

After completing your draft, take a step back and review it critically. Ask yourself, “So what?” for each section. Does each paragraph convey a clear takeaway? Ensure that your reflections on experiences demonstrate growth and a commitment to your goals. Seek feedback from peers or mentors to refine your essay further.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be aware of common mistakes that can weaken your essay:

• Avoid starting with clichés or generic statements.
• Steer clear of passive voice; prioritize active constructions.
• Do not fabricate experiences or achievements; authenticity is crucial.
• Ensure every section serves a purpose and contributes to your overall narrative.