Crafting Your Essay for the RAS Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a well-rounded essay, gather material from four key areas:

• Background: Consider your personal history, including influences that have shaped your academic and career aspirations. What experiences have led you to pursue education at the Rehoboth Antiquarian Society?
• Achievements: List significant accomplishments, both academic and extracurricular. Use metrics or specific examples to illustrate your contributions. For instance, did you lead a project that had measurable outcomes?
• The Gap: Identify what you currently lack in your education or experience that this scholarship would help you address. How does attending the Rehoboth Antiquarian Society fit into your long-term goals?
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal details that reveal your character. What values guide you? How do your interests reflect your commitment to your field?

Outline Your Essay

Structure your essay logically. A suggested outline could be:

1. Introduction: Start with a vivid moment or anecdote that encapsulates your journey or motivation.
2. Background: Discuss your formative experiences and how they led you to this point.
3. Achievements: Highlight key accomplishments, emphasizing their impact.
4. The Gap: Explain what further education means to you and how this scholarship will bridge that gap.
5. Personality: Share insights into your values and aspirations, connecting them to the scholarship's mission.
6. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and express your commitment to making a difference.

Drafting Voice and Style

When drafting your essay, aim for an active voice that engages the reader. Use specific examples and avoid vague statements. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, ensuring clarity and progression. Remember to weave in reflections that answer the “So what?” question—what changed in you, and why does it matter?

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a break before revising. Look for areas where you can deepen your reflections or clarify your points. Ensure that each section ties back to the scholarship’s goals and your personal narrative. Seek feedback from peers or mentors who can provide constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

As you prepare your essay, be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid cliché openers and filler phrases that dilute your message.
• Steer clear of superlatives or vague expressions of passion without proof.
• Ensure all facts are accurate and verifiable; do not invent experiences or achievements.
• Limit passive voice; instead, focus on your actions and contributions.