How to Write an Essay for the Richard D. Broward Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a comprehensive essay, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your upbringing, education, and any experiences that have shaped your values and aspirations. Consider significant moments that have influenced your academic journey.
• Achievements: List your accomplishments, both academic and extracurricular. Focus on metrics and outcomes that demonstrate your leadership and impact. Use numbers and specific examples to illustrate your contributions.
• The Gap: Identify areas where you seek growth or knowledge. Explain why further study at Stetson University is essential for your development and how the scholarship will bridge this gap.
• Personality: Infuse your essay with personal anecdotes and values. Share what makes you unique and how your character aligns with the scholarship’s vision.

Crafting Your Outline

Once you have gathered your material, outline your essay with a clear structure. Each section should serve a purpose and lead logically to the next:

1. Introduction: Open with a compelling scene or moment that sets the tone for your essay. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to a specific idea. Use the background, achievements, gap, and personality buckets to guide your content. Ensure each section reflects on your growth and answers the question, “So what?”
3. Conclusion: Summarize your key points and reinforce your commitment to making a positive impact through your education.

Drafting with Intent

As you draft, focus on active voice and specificity. Use concrete details to illustrate your points. Avoid clichés and vague statements; instead, let your unique voice shine through. Each paragraph should convey a clear idea and contribute to your overall narrative.

Revision and Reflection

After completing your draft, take a step back and review it critically. Look for areas where you can enhance clarity and impact. Ensure that every section reflects on your growth and answers the “So what?” question. Seek feedback from trusted peers or mentors to gain new perspectives.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or generic statements.
• Do not exaggerate or fabricate details about your experiences.
• Steer clear of passive voice; always highlight your actions.
• Ensure your essay maintains a coherent flow and logical progression.