How to Write Your Essay for the Ross A. Reynolds Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling narrative, gather material from the following four buckets:

• Background: Consider what experiences shaped you. Reflect on your upbringing, education, and any pivotal moments that influenced your values and aspirations.
• Achievements: Identify key accomplishments that demonstrate your leadership skills. Use specific metrics or outcomes to illustrate your impact, such as projects you led or initiatives you started.
• The Gap: Acknowledge areas where you seek growth. Explain why further study at Worcester State University is essential for your development and how this scholarship will help bridge that gap.
• Personality: Humanize your narrative by sharing personal anecdotes or values that define you. This will help the committee connect with you on a deeper level.

Outlining Your Essay

Once you have gathered your material, create an outline to organize your thoughts. A typical structure might include:

1. Introduction: Start with a specific moment or scene that captures your essence. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Dedicate each paragraph to one of the four buckets. Use the STAR method to describe specific situations, tasks, actions, and results.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on how your experiences have prepared you for future challenges and your commitment to making a positive impact.

Drafting Your Voice

As you draft, maintain an active voice and ensure clarity in your writing. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, with smooth transitions that guide the reader through your narrative. Avoid clichés and vague expressions; instead, use concrete examples to illustrate your points. Remember to answer the “So what?” question in each section, reflecting on how your experiences have shaped you.

Revision and “So What?”

After completing your draft, take a break before revising. Look for areas where you can enhance clarity and specificity. Check that each paragraph contributes to your overall narrative and that you effectively communicate your motivations and goals. Seek feedback from trusted peers or mentors and be open to constructive criticism.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

Be mindful of these common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or generic statements.
• Don’t exaggerate or fabricate experiences; authenticity is key.
• Steer clear of passive voice where possible; use active voice to convey your actions.
• Ensure your essay aligns with the scholarship’s values—focus on leadership and community impact.