How to Write Your Essay for the Farrey Endowed Scholarship

Brainstorming Across the Four Buckets

To create a compelling essay, gather material across four key areas:

• Background: Reflect on your personal history. What experiences have shaped your educational journey? Consider family influences, community involvement, or pivotal moments that led you to Worcester State University.
• Achievements: Identify your significant accomplishments. Focus on metrics, responsibilities, and outcomes. Have you led a project, achieved academic honors, or contributed to community initiatives? Quantify your impact where possible.
• The Gap: Assess what you currently lack in your academic or professional journey. How does further study at Worcester State University fit into your future goals? Be specific about the skills or knowledge you seek to gain.
• Personality: Humanize your essay by including details that reflect your values and character. What motivates you? What unique perspectives do you bring to your studies and community?

Outlining Your Essay

Once you have gathered your material, create an outline. Structure your essay with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each section should focus on one main idea:

1. Introduction: Open with a specific moment or scene that illustrates your journey or motivation. Avoid generic statements.
2. Body Paragraphs: Develop each of the four buckets in separate paragraphs. Use active voice and ensure each paragraph transitions logically to the next.
3. Conclusion: Reflect on your journey and articulate your commitment to making an impact. Answer the “So what?” question—what does your story mean for your future and for the community?

Drafting Voice and Style

While drafting, maintain an active voice and focus on clarity. Avoid clichés and vague expressions. Instead of saying you are “passionate,” demonstrate your passion through specific examples. Use precise language and concrete details to engage the reader.

Revision and “So What?”

After drafting, take a step back and revise your essay. Look for areas to enhance clarity and impact. Ensure that every paragraph answers the “So what?” question, reflecting on how your experiences have shaped you and what you plan to achieve in the future.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid

As you finalize your essay, be mindful of common mistakes:

• Avoid starting with clichés or generic statements.
• Do not rely on vague expressions of passion without supporting evidence.
• Steer clear of passive voice; always attribute actions to specific subjects.
• Ensure all details are accurate and verifiable—do not fabricate experiences or achievements.